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The Nightbringer

In Centuries ancient its tale begins
The bards I ve known are loath to sing it
for its a thing of a thousand sins
and cursed will be the one to swing it

The tale begins in moldy crypts
demonic smiths are sweating hard
and through the night's most evil mists
a blade attracts both light and dark

The warlock comes,his robes are flowing
his eyes now glow,with unholy light
and thundering voice brings cursed chanting
a spell that binds the sword with night:

"Come Erevus,come Night
come blackest Death and hateful Sorrow,
Obey my call and banish Light
and darken and plague,what comes tomorrow
With Blood and Screams I carve thy Blade
With ghostly Night I forge thy Being
With homage dark to Demons paid,
I give you might to slay all living
You will be named,The Death's last singer
the souls you take will feed the night
enemies to Hell you will deliver
your cursed blade ,I dub Nightbringer "

With sweating hands ,the mage collapsed
his last great curse,his being traversed
the sword with might and Darkness pulsed
as Night and Death its blade embraced

And now my friend,the story 's yours
to sing or not of this vile thing
beware though if some day comes
when you ll regret what you do sing

Cause the Nightbringer listens
when its name is being sang
and the raging curse that it delivers
will strike the righteous with horrors dark....
©2002-2009 ~raistlin
:iconraistlin:

Author's Comments

Anemovatis made a very nice sword,I named it Nightbringer and wrote the story behind it..this is it

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:iconkindsage:
Interesting! Very!



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i love Jesus Christ with all my heart.
:iconvrumchev:
quite decent! added to favourites!!
:iconanemovatis:
it's a foverito!!! :) (Smile) :) (Smile) :) (Smile) :) (Smile)


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Death is only the next step.
:iconwhite-alcemist:
My greatest fear, the darkest thought
The thirst for gore in my bloodiest finger
Power crafted, the spirit's caught
I shall master Nightbringer...

Tromeri istoria. I give it an A+.
:iconeilidh:
Bloody impressive!!... I love the curse itself; it's a very powerful moment. Well done!! =D (Big Grin)
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Love and Faeriedust

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:iconlorelaiv:
This is so cool!from a poet's point of view, it's extremely well written, from a witch's point of view, I totally adored the curse!!!(can't help it...)
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I ride wild storms all through the night,
Dark,hear my call,obey my might...
:iconanemovatis:
hehehehe, i am going to put it again into my favs. :D (Big Grin)

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Death is only the next step.
:iconspunj13:
very cool, and excellently written... the rhyme scheme and all really works well for this type of piece...much like a heroic poem...only darker...

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:iconthiefofcolours:
Incredibly powerful imagery and I absolutely love the way the story is told here.
Moving work indeed.

stay well

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